Keep it up. Your animation is smooth but could use more practice. It was too short also. I don't know why people told you to get a better artist because it seemed well done to me.
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Great potential, good smooth animation, you need to work on your drawing technique. But thats ok. Dont listen to the asshole who reviewed this before me. He has no idea what hes talking about.
I gave style a zero because this type of character is unorigional. The graphics are decent but I think you should add shadows. Great use of interactivity, even spells have a certain arm movement to do.
I tried to go for the Max Payne feel with Ronin, but it's a bit washed up because I also need to incorporate H scenes into the storyline. I'll definitely work on deeper character developments if there's a sequel.
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